Miles, this is just fantastic work. Your understanding and application of generic elements is about as good as it gets and now that you've added titles and a very effective soundtrack, it's very hard to fault. The title at the end is excellent and the pacing is absolutely spot on. My only quibble is that perhaps it is still slightly underexposed and some detail has been lost in the shadows, but i appreciate that you want the high contrast look, so it's up to you whether you correct this or not. Now it's time to get it seen by your target audience, as the evaluation asks about their reaction and feedback. I am extremely impressed as ever so slightly jealous, you've got a very bright future in filmmaking and not many people of your age can create work at this standard. Oh yeah, and see me about the blood splatter! You've probably already solved this though!
Miles, this is just fantastic work. Your understanding and application of generic elements is about as good as it gets and now that you've added titles and a very effective soundtrack, it's very hard to fault. The title at the end is excellent and the pacing is absolutely spot on. My only quibble is that perhaps it is still slightly underexposed and some detail has been lost in the shadows, but i appreciate that you want the high contrast look, so it's up to you whether you correct this or not. Now it's time to get it seen by your target audience, as the evaluation asks about their reaction and feedback. I am extremely impressed as ever so slightly jealous, you've got a very bright future in filmmaking and not many people of your age can create work at this standard. Oh yeah, and see me about the blood splatter! You've probably already solved this though!
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